Sorry, but I think Vince wins it
Shin's Version:
The sound and your battle scenes were all you had going for you. There were a lot of typos, no seeming idea of plot (We're given no background as to why Crono is captive.), and you mixed up sprites from several different games (Backgrounds from MMX1 and MMX3, doors from MMX1 and MMZ, sprites from Chrono Trigger and MMZ), so you lost points in my book for that.
Score: 6/10
Vince's Version:
You had a good plot going with yours, and it was nice that you kept the sprites, sounds, and everything else limited to the Chrono Trigger world. However, the plot you made had no relation to the title, "The Escape". Your fight scenes were mediocre at best, and you used the entirely wrong backgrounds for "Magus' Lair".
Score: 7/10
In my book, Vince wins.