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Between Good and Excellent

I can't go saying this flash is excellent, but I can't say it's good either. It's in between. The animation itself was very well done, very enjoyable. Most of the music was well fitting (Except the Requiem of a Dream song, it doesn't fit). I personally think that you should've just used Sonic and Sparks for that new team. Wolverine and Earthworm Jim are... out of place... in this kind of thing (Same with Magneto and Ridley. Perhaps using the other rocket swordsman from Rocket Knight would be better).

The story itself is decent. Being an amatuer writer, I can find a lot of uniqueness in your story. For example, the whole "Super Sonic is a monster" thing with the added incomplete speaking, and how Metal Sonic (Mecha Sonic is actually what you deemed as "Version 2"), a robot who normally cannot speak, speaks to Robotnik.

I think you should put credits on the end as well (Namely put that you animated it and such, where you got the sprites from, and what music was used.).

Not bad, but really could be improved

First off, there is the wheel thing. You should try to animate the wheels when not in close up, since not having it makes it a pain to watch the same scenes over and over.

Next, don't make all your gradients go from the color all the way to black. That just looks bad.

Show less screens so you can slow them down. Most of the screens I can't even see because of the damn transparancy and how fast they fly by. You showed a set of scenes from the movie at a slow speed, use that throughout the rest of it.

I suggest you actually move the sun the other way, so it looks more natural for the sun to move so damn fast.

Like everyone else, make the transformation part for Optimus. It'd give you some needed bonus points.

Finally, try to add more scenes of Optimus as a truck, since having the same scenes for a few minutes is annoying.

The music is meeh, although I personally think using "The Touch", which was used in the movie, would be MUCH more fitting.

Finally, when you add more scenes of truck Optimus, shorten some other scenes so you can get even more.

I could go on more, but I won't.

- Tenki

Another masterpeice of the Xombie Series

I have to say, this story it keeps getting better and better. That was, in fact, a well done fight scene. I don't think it could've been done much better. I'm curious, though, what music did you use during the fight scene, and at the end? They don't sound like anything I know of.

- Tenki

Fucking funny!

Holy crap, that was great Dini! I almost burst out laughing (It's 3 AM here, and everyone else is in bed, so I can't burst out laughing) from that one! Totally great!

- Tenki

Nice job, Yarhar.

Yarhar, it's been a while. Seems you made a couple more LTL episodes. Good job.

To anyone who has said this movie "sucks": Yarhar made most of the LTL series over a year ago, when he was starting in Flash. He's only submitting one a day, though, so that each one has an equal view range. He isn't making these really fast. That's why it looks so bad. I'm sure he'll produce better ones with more plot.

Excellent.

I'll start out by being honest. I've never watched a Lock movie that I liked. Well, before this one. This is the first Lock movie I've come to like.

There's not much I can say on your skills, since you did very well, TrashLock. Excellent work.

Very nicely done

This has squeezed its way into my favs at 3rd place. I have to say it's very nicely done, very clean and very smooth.

Only thing I noticed off was at the very end before the credits. The song cuts off a moment before the animation cuts off, leaving about a half second gap.

Other than that, it was excellent. I'm guessing you made this for a guy named Adam, based on your last message in the credits. I hope you end up making more of this, cause it looks like it could spawn a great series.

Best Glitch So Far.

I'll be honest, most of the other glitches were kinda just weird and spotty. This one was a lot more smoother, a lot more funnier, and overall a lot more better. Great work, man.

Great play on stereotypes

First off, I'm gonna say I don't know many Canadian flash artists that can do THIS kind of work, especially ones that live "a stone's throw" away from me, so it's pretty cool to finally find someone like that.

Second, you have excellent flash skills, this was one of the best flash videos I've seen. I think you also did well with your stereotypes, and the idea of doing it into a rap song was even better.

I think Newgrounds needs more flash artists like you, who can actually do good animations. That's not to say there aren't any good flash artists, cause there are, but you seem to have your own style, which I enjoyed in all your gangsta rap movies.

Don't think I have much else to say, but keep up the good work.

And to all you people who complain about the stereotypes portrayed, you all gotta realize that this is a damn PARODY. It's SUPPOSE to play on stereotypes. On top of this, they're STEREOTYPES! You can't stop people from makin' stereotypes, so get over it.

- Tenki

Hilarious!!!

This is, by far, one of the funniest things I've ever seen appear on Newgrounds. I thought your "Return of Ganondorf" cartoon was funny, but this topples it! Where do you get the ideas for these cartoons anyway? Keep up the kickin' work, and don't stop with the hilarious antics!

- Tenki

I'm a writer from the sunny beaches of Canada, trying to give people something worth getting into.

Drew @Skye-McCloud

Age 39, Male

Writer, Web Designer

Sheridan College

Toronto, Ont, Canada

Joined on 5/8/03

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